Is this a good opening paragraph for a environmental science essay on renewable energy?
Saturday, September 13th, 2008Essay Prompt…What is the most important environmental problem we face and why? …………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
I believe the most telling environmental problem that the United States (and many other countries) will face in the near future will be the transition away from a fossil fuel based society. In order to accomplish this, we must make a concerted push towards an environmentally conscious, technologically advanced, and humanistic renewable energy generation. The resources available to achieve this are essentially limitless, with new ways to utilize them being introduced almost daily. As a matter of fact, there are some extremely promising options that are already in use, such as the production of wind, solar, and geothermal energy. Ultimately though, it will be public policy and political decision makers which will dictate whether or not these efforts are successful, halfhearted, or even pursed at all.
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SHANNON
